My, I feel stupid.
I thought in the last chapter, that he had killed them, already. I guess I was mistaken. But, all is well now! I understand.
Anyway, I'm finding sympathy for Aymi and Brendon and their marriage. Well, not anymore, but you get the point.
I can almost sense that Brendon truly loves Aymi, and that Ryan is making a rather fool (and lunatic) out of himself. I mean, he needs to realize that he can't make Brendon love him, and injuring them isn't really the best solution.
I feel bad for Ryan, though. Because he is so in love with Brendon, but he doesn't realize that Brendon doesn't really love him. He loves Aymi. And risking their lives isn't the way to prove your love to someone.
Of course, Ryan is crazy.
I absolutely adore this story and you must write more soon!
Author's response
ok you know what, you mite as well be that little voice in my mind like the one ryan has because you my dear, get this story and the point im trying to get across completely (sp).
what im trying to convey is that ryan actually and truly thinks that brendon loves him and that this is just a big game that theyre playing, but i should shut up or ill tell the ending.
(dont feel stupid. i do that plenty of times, review to authors telling them how i hate them about leaving the last chapter with such suspense or something when theres a next chapter i didnt se. lol.)
anyhoo, i will be writing more soon. only thing is, i dont know when soon is so keep looking for it.