(#) zevie 2008-06-09
I love the little details in this about Soda helping Darry out when the social worker comes over, and Ponyboy watching TV lol. I love that little bratty behaviour in Ponyboy.
I also liked the way you described Soda and Sandy's relationship - how she's "unknowable" to him, and the way you describe her feminine wiles lol. Very true to the little bits of their relationship in the book, and very believable as well.
I like how your OC's not the centre of attention quite yet - it's still much on Soda and Darry.