Ok, first time I read this story and I can say its really good. love that Neville was the boy who lived and know what will happen (at least part of it).
Nice changes, really noble way to die for Snape. I like how Hermione is more assertive in her emotions with Harry and how he is clueless, I cant wait to see how they develop.
Will be interesting to know who will be Neville love interest, even if is not Ginny anymore I am sure he will still harbor some feelings.
Cant wait to read next chapter and know what will Albus plan to get the horocruxes, also that he knows that not all that happened before will happen, after all every change make a new future.
Any way hope to read more soon.
Cheers.
MAC
Author's response
Thanks; I'm planning to have the next chapter up on Wednesday night.
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