I read the flashbacks. It kinda makes you remember what happened in the beginning. I also think that Sleep is appropriate. I love that song too but My favorite off the Black Parade CD is Disenchanted. I was obsessed with The Sharpest Lives at one point.
Your an amazing writer and I love this story. Its awesome
Author's response
Yeah, i thought it was important.
I was obsessed with Disenchanted at one time too, and The Sharpest Lives is also amazing! Thats why i wrote a story dedicated to that song ;)
Thank you so much. I'm really glad you like it!
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