Nice, very nice start to your story and it definitely catches the reader's interest from the start. I like the set-up you've given us and I'm going to be very interested in where you take Harry from here. I rather imagine Dumbles will have a fecal hemorrage if Harry transfers to this other school; that, by itself, could be quite entertaining as would the reactions of Harry friends and enemies to such a transfer. Failing such a transfer, I wonder if he could get either summer schooling or correspondence courses to help with his training?
Author's response
Yeah, I plan on focusing some time on Dumbledore's reaction. Unfortunately that won't happen for quite some time though...Thanks for the review.
--S.R.