An excellent start. I rather like that harry considers ron and hermonie as his close friends but not his best friends. Less attachement to stop him from learning about his new school and going there.
Eagerly wating for the next update.
Author's response
Well, I'm glad that you've like it so far. One thing I've never like about the cannon is how small Harry's circle of friends is up until fifth or six year; for the most part, it's unrealistic. More about who he know will be touched into later on. Thanks for the review.
-S.R.