wow
that was... incredible
it was kind of long for a one-shot, but if it had been any shortet it would have felt too rush
so many plots are way too overused, but yours was amazing
original and beautiful
you write so well, loved the style!
please write some more!
Author's response
Heee, thank you!
I know it was a bit long but I felt like you, too. I didn't wanna rush anything...
Thanks again, I'll try to write more but I don't know if the plot will come to me again like this one did. I guess I need to be inspired :)