Like AL said it has a remarkable parallel to Second Chance at Life and Changes in a Time of war. That said nice start, looking forward to more, if you need someone to proof read for you, I currently have nothing to do during the day, and my bachelors classes in the evening, so if you need help give me a holla, my yahoo ID: exyouth87
Author's response
I'd appreciate the help; I'll email you. And thanks for the review.
--S.R.