Loved this - wanted to rate it, but I can only take points off now, and that would be bad!
Like MidnightWhisper7 said, Fran seems a bit more talkative here than in the game, but I've always thought she's more chatty when only Balthier is around - they do seem to have that sort of connection.
I wanted to see something like this in the game, and was disappointed when it didn't happen. These two are my favourite characters in it! I love how Fran kept cutting Balthier off and never backed down at the end - and the whole exchange about her shoes and his rings (loved that rebuttal, by the way!) was awesome.
Good job!
-- SC