Review for Dirty Lips and Bloody Eyes

Dirty Lips and Bloody Eyes

(#) MarkPoa 2008-06-17

This is a pretty good dark piece. I like the use of the two sentence stanza to break up the pacing. And the repetition of the title phrase was pretty good and haunting.

It feels a bit moralistic with the suicide at the end, but I think you might have been aiming for that.

Author's response

yeah, i was in a pretty dark mood!
thank you again!