Hey, i really like this story, its original, and a nice change.
I totally agree with what Life_is_42, you have avoided the sterotype of emo ryan and added something different. thankyou =]
i love Helen!
Author's response
Awe, thank you so much.
I'm glad that I've added something new. I'm always worried I may write something a little cliche. =/
But, thanks for the review!