Review for Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

(#) slayersfan01 2008-06-20

Oh god, that was awful to the ninth degree. Daphne's father is a fucking asshole that should be assraped by the Count so he can see how it is like to be used like a thing. Seriously, the guy needs to die and to suffer at the hands of the most dangerous people of all, a group of very protective and prone to violence mothers (having Harry and company kill him will be good too). Mrs. Greengrass needs to have her Justice as well. Please include her in the violence in the next chapter as the one who cuts off his manhood or something before Harry kills him.

That was one hell of a cliffhanger. I hate cliffhangers. Please, update soon, very soon.

Please, no more making Harry's love interests be raped. Acts of Betrayal was Ugh (good read but squimish about it specially since Ron was able to get in that one last rape), this is a hell of a lot worse since noone was around to save Daphne. I really fear seeing the next time you come up with another situation where Harry's love interests gets raped. I'll probably still read it but will have to puke up whatever I last ate afterwards. I hate throwing up.