FINALLY!
I've been waiting so long for this update!
And I assure you, that I was not disappointed.
I like how you made William seem so realistic. Like, he just isn't the flirty, fun guy, but he also has a heart and emotions as well. And the fact that he sort of looks out for Keltie, is sweet. It's almost like he is an older brother to her. :]
Oh, oh, oh! And Ryan is in love! And I think you portray that very well. How Ryan is always thinking about him and even the tiniest thing Brendon does, makes Ryan feel all giddy and such. It's like, you captured the exact emotion one feels when in love. :]
I loved this chapter!
Update soon!
Author's response
Thank you so much! And I know its been a very long time since update, but that's just because I've been really busy with school and stuff.
You know, I think I'm going to start writing my next chapter now, 'cause getting great reviews seem to fuel my mind. XD
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Kendra