Gawd, how I loved this story and YOU.
You cannot believe how many tears I shed, how many laughs I giggled, how many cuss words I shouted, while reading this INCREDIBLE fic.
It was just that emotive. And you can hardly find many fics that can evoke that much emotion out of me. I swear. So, two thumbs up for that one.
And the fact that you have quite the obsession with writing and the feedback, shows that you are an extremely wonderful writer. It means you are dedicated and will improve upon ANYTHING if necessary. (Which, you shouldn't have to do, because there is no need for improvement, because it was fucking AMAZING)
Gahh.
Favorite parts? Hmmm. Really, I can't choose. It was all so breathtaking. :]
BUT--
My favorite chapters were probably Be Kind, Don't Rewind and A Wonderful Caricture of Intimacy? I Don't Know. You Tell Me. (or something along those lines)
I think it gave a real feel for Ryan's emotions and how in love he was.
I also liked how you portrayed the fact that people will probably do anything for love (Well, at least Ryan) Even if it means going completely insane and murdering people. :]
Plus, you had many, many, many, MANY beautiful quotes/metaphors/youknowwhatImean out of this. You did a wonderful job on your first fic. :]
I truly hope you do write more soon. :]
Author's response
awwww. thanks!
hugs you till you turn purple
I kinda don't know where to start so if everything seems all over the place, you were warned.
First,other chapters.
There were some chapters like the ones you said that I just wanted him to go out of talking to himself and to like the readers for a while.
I really liked A Diary With No Pages because a lot of that was some of my personal feelings. But anyhoo.
It's nice to know that I don't seem too crazy for the way I'm always checking things. It sorta gives me peace of mind.
Next, Some of the quotes.
I've been told in that past that I'm confusing and hard to understand.
But if you ask me, the same people who tell me that are like speaking fucking japanese so I have no idea what they're on about.
With all the metaphors and how I describe things I just want to make sure I'm not stuck with foreingers.
Last, last chapter.
Even I was blown away at some of the stuff I wrote.
Like from, Every hair curled to how I want it to stay.
After I wrote that part, I literally stopped.
Read it.
And decided I am officially certain I don't belong with the rest of society.
lol.
Moving on.
I have to say, I REALLY am suprised (and somewhat confused) at peoples reactions but that's all good.
I guess.
Lol, but for now, I'm gonna send my brain to Tahiti for nine days and just be stupid for a while. XP