Ohkay...
Well, after reading this chapter, I'm not sure I can deliver an EQUALLY amazing review.
But, I CAN say that I love your characters. They seem so realistic. :]
Especially the little sister. She's kind of bratty, but whatever. I somehow enjoy those characters. They are rather... Entertaining. :]
Eh, I don't know. I'm just weird like that.
And attractive police officers who flirts with girls who were supposedly missing are always fun. I like him. He's neat. :]
Welllllll....
Since I left a REALLY lousy review, I'm just gonna give you a compliment.
Your third chapter was AWESOME.
There you go. :]
Update soon?
Yes? Yes.
Good.
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Author's response
I like them too. Well not so much Sabrina, but you know, who likes sisters all the time? She won't always be a bitch, mostly she will, but not always. As for that police officer, he may or may not make a cameo in future chapters (and by that I mean he will but I'm not quite sure how yet). He'll need a name before that can happen though. Maybe Mason. Maybe not. haha.
As for an update, I'm going to start writing the next chapter as soon as I finish writing this. I have some ideas, but it probably won't be that exciting because it's quite the filler chapter, but who knows, maybe i'll stumble across something that will make it awesome. I'm not promising anything though. : )