I loved it!
It wasn't weird!
A little different yeah, but weird NO!!
The quote I read-
"We're stuck here until our souls don't like the body their in anymore".
Just plain brilliant.
For something so short, it definitely has a lot of meaning and it shows off your way with words perfectly.
Though I'm a little sad that this isn't a story with chapters, I completely encourage you to write more poems, if they have affects like this.
Author's response
Well, thanks :D.
People don't usually like my writing so much.
I've written some stories on a fansite I have on myspace, and people have really like some of those stories, but never really got that much liking to my poems, I have a lot of poems written up but never posted, so i think i might type a few up :D
But your review made me really happy though :D