Review for Trying Not To Make A Scene

Trying Not To Make A Scene

(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-06-26

Awe! Poor Brendon. =[

Well, first I'd like to say is that this first chapter is amazingly fantastic. :]

I like the plot you have here and your writing skills are lovely. :]

Constructive criticism? Eh...

It is a little short. =/

Nonetheless, it was a terrific start and I can't wait to read more. :]

Update soon!

Author's response

Thank you!

Chapter length has always been a weak point for me but the next ones should be a bit longer. =)