Review for Sometimes Venus Orbits the Moon

Sometimes Venus Orbits the Moon

(#) michi6877 2008-06-26

Beyond wonderful!!! Grins Want/need more!!! well done on all of these.

Author's response

Woo! I got a review?!

I've spent the last several months pecking at a longer Yuna/Lulu story, and I have this problem. They sit around being extremely kind to each other, and NOTHING WHATSOEVER HAPPENS!

They cuddle, but I can't seem to make them have sex, and the story is very bland.

I've set it aside for now. Sooner or later, hopefully, it will percolate through my unconscious into a real story.