I really like how descriptive you are and how you connect Brendon's emotions with rain. It was amazing.
And the fact that he's blind is incredible. Like, it's original and nobody has done it before.
I love when authors bring something new to the table.
It's fresh, it's new! IT'S AMAZING!
(I would rate, but I don't have anymore points left.)
I wasn't that confident that anyone would actually like the idea of a blind!Brendon, but I'm glad that you think it's good. Gives me hope that my next chapters will actually get a couple of hits. XD