Ah, yes.
The length is very, very good. Just right. :]
I love your writing style. You give such grace with adjectives and whatnot. Its great to read something that isn't choppy and unflowing. :]
I also like the characters you have here. Both Brendon and Abigal are a little wacky and the dialogue is fantastic. Very realistic.
Update soon!
Author's response
Ooh yay! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means a lot getting compliments from you. =)