wow i don't know what to think except...unconventional! i'm definitely rating this as original!
well written and i have to admit, it made me smile/giggle a little :)
although i was going to review in spirit of the story...
you know what, i hated it and i'm rating it train-wreck. so there. ;)
Author's response
lol train-wreck, eh? How rude lol evil. Anyway, I am glad you liked it =) I wasn't sure how people were going to react to it lol.