Review for The One

The One

(#) NotWavingButDrowning 2008-06-30

It was beautiful. I loved how you used the same sentance structure but changed their thoughts. Really well written.

Author's response

YAY! My first review on this story.
I'm glad you like it.
I started writing it from jsut Gerard's point of view.
But then i was like, OH i could do this.
ya thanks for the review.