AW cute! and surprisingly realistic the way they have met. :) and i like that she doesn't know who he is. that is a HUGE plus!
the length seemed perfect this chapter! a noted improvement from the first...but the first was more of a prologue anyway, so that fit well too.
and you write very well, may i say. so keep up the good work and the writing! =)
Author's response
Thank you for the review! =)