(#) egb67 2008-07-01
I'm really, really enjoying this story! I didn't expect the Harry/Daphne angle (I'm almost exclusively an HHr shipper), but you've done a great job with this and I'm very impressed. The writing is tight and well thought out and you've done a great job with the story line. It moves and flows honestly and there are no jagged points or glaring omissions that make the story uneven.
SO - please keep writing!
Regards,
the_scribbler