Aw, man, I wanted to see how much Link would get weirded out by Impa...She's kind in the game, but you could easily spin it to where she is creepier than Zelda.
Zelda is obsessive to a creepy extent, and she jumps to conclusions to easily.
Nabooru SUPPORTING Ganon??? Makes sense, now that I think about it, since you're making Gannondorf a good guy.
There's a few grammar errors in here, like "quite" instead of "quiet", but nothing that will throw the reader completely off.
PLEASE keep writing, I really like this!!!!!!
~Sakura