Review for Checking Up

Checking Up

(#) strayphantom 2005-10-28

Now when has Aya EVER tried to subvert the younger generation? Hatori is far too suspicious... >_>

This amused me greatly, and I loved your characterisation of Ayame! It was spot on! I see Hatori has softened somewhat since we first met him, and Aya seems quiter (still fun, though!)

Great job!

Author\'s Response: Oh yes, Aya is the VERY PICTURE of virtue and good breeding. ^__^ I'm glad you liked it. I try to keep folks IC at all costs.