I read it, and I went through your reviews. You've not had one bad review. This will be your first. There are two things that are really lacking in this story. One, there are tons of spelling context errors in the story. Two, it's one demensional. You're telling a story through letters, which doesn't allow for dialogue or reaction. With that, you have an interesting underlying story that just isn't there. What happened between Hermione and Ron and why did they go their separate ways. Is Harry dead? Is this story over? Because I went back to the story description and it isn't logged as complete. There seems to be more to tell, but that's up for you.
Geovanni Luciano
Author's response
First off I would like to say wow. I don't think that I ever had a review flat out say it was going to be a bad review before. Second I'm sorry that you found it one demisional. I just wrote what I did at the time. The spelling errors come from the fact that I'm the only one who looked it over since I don't have a beta so I take all the blame. I left it like I did not to be lazy but for you to go is he dead. I might come back an bring the past to life more, but for now I set out to write a story in this time frame I had set. So this is where I will leave it. Thanks for the review.