Good grins. There was a lot of potential here. Would especially have been intereting to explore the relatinship between Harry and Hermonie's parents. Well done, that is a powerful story. For a good example, check out Vox Corporis by MisAnnThropic, maybe the finest H/Hr ever written. Never could figure the Ron/Hr thing; she'd eat him alive in six months. Sad to say, JKR was clueless about relationship writing. Anyway, thanks for a good red; maybe this can offer a few ideas worth exploring