Review for A Twisted Timeline

A Twisted Timeline

(#) Dragen 2008-07-02

Oh another great chapter mate, I love how the story is going and can't wait to see what you have planed next.

If Kreacher behaved better and treat his master better he would be treated better, but it all down to the bitch of his old mistress.

I do like this Weaver character, he wants to clean up, but he can't do much.

I like what happened to Umbitch - lol - being turned into a tord she is and being feed to Vinny.

I like what 'Barone' did to Voldemort, putting out a hit on him. Oh I love what 'Barone' did to the Death Eaters, though I think he has last it with Rodolphus.

I like how Harry and Luna meet.