Like everyone else, I am really am enjoying your fic!!!
And like everyone else again, I am really looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
I had to agree with BenRG comment about the girl holding the diary is very confusing to me. I thought the one with it had to one of two girls that I consider empty headed enough to irritate Tom was Lavender and ...er.. Padma twin (no cannon books close. OOps?!?). Then I reviewed the chapter again, and realized you said the Moldyshorts had be careful going past the sorting had?.?.? Generva never struck as the empty headed type. See, confusing!
Again, thanks for the good and fun read.
May the MUSES always be with you!!!
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Author's response
- Thank you.
- Empty headed is in the eye of the beholder don't forget. The 16 year old Tom Riddle in the Diary was a Type A personality, a real driven asshole. From his perspective, an eleven year old girl who writes about cooking, cleaning, shopping, rumors she hears, and her father's odd hobbies would be very empty headed...