Review for Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

(#) PerfesserN 2008-07-03

Excellent job explaining Harry's type A+ personality. What's that line? I see it coming up in a yet unpublished chapter, wait, there it is . . . With great power comes great responsibility . . .
Of course, give any 9 year old of my acquaintance the power of chaos magic and she or he will see what makes the biggest fireball when it's blown up!
I especially liked the scene in a previous chapter where Harry and Padma surprise Hermione on her birthday - they had lots of fun that day, they were kids. How about letting them have some more harmless fun? Or . . . What were Harry's last words before waking up in the hospital? "Hey guys, watch this!"
In other words, let him be a kid s'more! I know, give them a competent teacher who makes the class fun.
I'm available.
N!

Author's response

- Oh no. I don't want someguy with cobwebs all over his footy jammies coming over and beating me up.

- I doubt that I'll do another Talk like a Pirate day. It worked the first time because it was unexpected... They'll have to surprise Hermione some other way.

- Sorry Prof, you're not qualified to teach at Hogwarts. You show dangerous signs of competence...