Review for My First Fanfic!!

My First Fanfic!!

(#) sushifreak 2008-07-04

Ok, something is weird with this site the stuff I wrote didnt appear... I wrote that it was realllyyy good and I was sad to see end so quickly... And you write really well!!! So you should write more and yeah ill be there to comment on each of them!!! But my comments wont always be mean... hahahaha LOL XD I bet I gave you a heart atack right when you started to read my previous one.. LMAO ;)