Wow...um... wow. That was a really good chapter. really intense, man.
I kept thinking of the Bird and the Worm cause you kept mentioning hiss backpack.
And I'm sure Bert wouldn't think this was crap if he read it.
-Robbie (but not McCracken...sorry)
Author's response
Merci beaucoup and you don't have to apologize for not being Bert!
And yeah...Bird and the Worm references...the next chapter's has a Maybe Memories reference (but not the song)