Jezz, Jared's a bit angry there, isn't he? lol.
And Jade's...eh.
And the girl (forgot the name, sorry, it's nearly three in the AM) she's still half dead.
lol. All in due time everything will be explained, I assume? ^^
Heh, well this one is quite interesting.
Compared to some that is. :P
(No that wasn't meant in a mean way)
Write more, because I like reading your stuff.
Add some more to the chapters maybe though?
They're kind of short.
But they're your stories, not mine. ^^
Better put the pencil to the paper!
And soon! ^^