Hey if you want to rewrite this, thats okay its is after all your story but I want you to know this is one hell of an ideal and so far story so whatever you do please dont drop off the face of the earth! PLEASE Continue THIS!
Author's response
I am mostly just changing things I did not like the first time I wrote the story. I am still working on it now that I have more time, and I hope to be doing new chapters of book one soon.