OUTSTANDING chapter and I love the fact that your willing to put the readers into the story as a character, so I guess I'll start by giving out all my details: I'm 6'6" about 250lbs give or take a couple, blue eyes, black hair bout shoulder length, my career is making swords and armor with my forge, I live in Oregon in the united states, my name is Jeff Strauser, I think thats everything, oh my personality is a little twisted I'm funny, I love horror movies, I love reading mostly fantasy, I think I got it all covered, if I don't make it up, I wont care, I just think its cool your willing to add your readers into story you've created, do keep up the outstanding work, and update soon please:):):):)