Review for Kiss My Eyes And Lay Me To Sleep

Kiss My Eyes And Lay Me To Sleep

(#) alice93 2008-07-11

Oh God, that story was so beautiful.

It's probably the best one-shot I've ever read on ficwad.

I loved everything about it. I loved how you made Gerard use Mikey's middle name and Frank use his own. And I also liked how, even though Frank was younger, he seemed like the older of the two. The flashback was really beautiful-that's when I started to cry.
My favourite part of it though, was the way you described Gerard, it was absolutely perfect. It's exactly how I would've described him if I could write that well. And Franks description was good too.
Beautiful story, made me cry. Well done.
Alice.

Author's response

Heee, thankieeesss!!

I just love that you shared your favorite parts of the story with me, it makes me even happier! Actually I was gonna make Frank use some other name because his middle name was kinda shouting "I'm Frank, you idiot!" but nothing really came to my mind and I stuck with it ;)

And since I like looking at Gerard, just plain admiring him for long periods of time, I like describing him very much! So I'm glad you like my description of him, hehee =)

Thanks again!

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