Umm, am I the only one who has noticed that the Halloween troll scene never happened? Yet you mention it in this chapter, in Hermione's parents' reminiscing.
Other than that, this is a really fun story, and I am enjoying it immensely.
Hmmm... you're right. I had the idea of writing this story in collaboration with another writer, but I never actually bothered to include the troll scene. They did encounter the troll in seeking out the Stone; does that count? ;)
Thanks for your praise, and another part should be out soon.