You really don't know that a lot of your fillers just happen to be your best work.
I love all the metaphors, and of course, the infamous rain.
Great job, can't wait for more.
[oh and PS - YOU ARE WELCOME. I LOVE BEING YOUR BETA!]
Author's response
Ahhh, I love you.
Well, my fillers usually consist of a lot of description and metaphors, so I guess they are good. (I must admit though, I do love this chapter, even if it is a filler)
And I am happy to have you as my beta. :]
Thank you for the review. :]]