Review for Searching for Disaster

Searching for Disaster

(#) dougal74 2008-07-13

A good start. I think from your writing he would make a good Ravenclaw (although you've not said anything about his schooling) as he shows a willingness to question things and it seems is very obserant. Doe's he get Hedwig and will he be friends with Hermione, if so a Ravenclaw Hermione without the blind obedience to authority and reliance on book knowledge would be good.