There is so few good harry/harem fic's that I ever read and this one is one of them. Good work!
Your writing style is diffrent than Rorschach's Blot but some people probably forgetting that you are making most of one of his idea (what he encourage) and not trying to just copy him.
Thank you! I appreciate Rorschach's stories, but I'm trying to take mine in a different direction. To quote Sam Goldwyn, "Let's have some new cliches."