I loved this story, I think I read all 32 chapters straight. It's like 2:30 am and I'm finally done!
(Please don't take this the wrong way) Your story reminds me of Harry Potter and Philosopher's (Sorcerer's) Stone. You know, with the stone, and the part where Alyssa confronted Frank...was like where Quirrel confronted Harry. Then there's the idea of the stone...they're so similar, yet so different! I love your stories!
Your an awesome writer, and I really think you should write a sequel for this!!! :D
Author's response
Wow... you must have drank a lot of coffee to be able to stand reading 32 chapters straight and not fall asleep! O_O
Interesting point of view. I can see how the Stone of Life reminds you of the stone in Harry Potter (although it wasn't my intention, just needed something small and magical that could be hidden easily and thats what came out), but the comparison of Quirrel and Harry with Alyssa and Frank is very interesting. Never thought of it that way... maybe my subconscious is playing games with me! haha
Thanks so much for reading all my stories and for reviewing them all. I really appreciate it. Feedback is what keeps me going! ;)
Thanks! Haha I was thinking about a sequel and what would happen if i decided to go ahead with it, but we'll see about that. First of all... i'll have to finish this story! xD
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