Review for An American Wizard in Hogwarts

An American Wizard in Hogwarts

(#) GryffindorDragon 2008-07-16

Not a bad chapter. But you left out Peter's betrayal. There's the announcement that Voldie is in/coming to America and Peter's arrest, but no account as to why he was arrested?!?

Author's response

I'm sorry, did your logic train jump the tracks?