Read it all today and enjoyed it
The 'nerfherder' was a big what? followed by a maybe and then an excellent
Nicely done working an Star Wars quote into your story
Looking forward to more
How about Harry yelling 'Khan!' at Moldieshorts? heh heh
Thanks
Author's response
Thanks for the review. I can't say I really knew how I was going to use the nerfherder quote at the time, but that was the beauty of using it. You never know what you might want to refer back to later on (eg, the locket they couldn't open while cleaning up Grimmauld Place.)