(#) Vanir 2008-07-20
I agree with the good Doctor, fools rush in. I did:)
The summer's looking up, and the description of the lovegood home was great. Enough details to give the outlines, and plenty of space for my own imagination.
Your Moody is absolutely wonderful. Still tougher than most nails, he still has the ability to be a bit human. I usually miss that in the oh too common hardass-Moody. I'd advice against using too much Hogwarts faculcy. It's supposed to be training, not summer school, right? If you need ideas on possible Swedish, or Norse, resources or phrases you're welcome to dial "seidheim" at hotmail. Happy to help. Now, let's see who gets the next chapter out first. :)
Vanir
Author's response
Hi Vanir,
Thanks for the willingness to help out - I've sent an email off with what I'm hoping for.
I don't mind Moody myself. We know he's a tough old veteran, but I've tried to expand a little on the character we saw in the movies as well. The Moody that would throw a duster across a classroom, and hum along to himself at a ball. (I know, it was Barty Jr impersonating him, but still).
As for the tower, that really came out of DH, though I did create the island counter for them to work at. I imagine it as something like a breakfast bar.
Brian