Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-07-21

thanks for updating!

i really like also how you are getting real events into the story.

really hope Jill and Bob get together soon.

i like how you are writing all the characters.

thanks very much!

Author's response

"happy dance" thank you so much for reviewing and i'm so happy you are enjoying the story. I promise more will happen with Bob and Jill soon.