Review for Fantasy

Fantasy

(#) never0kay 2008-07-25

Oh don't be upset!

In fact, I LIKE THIS SHIT!

Seriously! I'm not balling you or anything but when I read Chapter 3 I was like screaming...OMG OMG OMG. THAT'S SO SWEET!

I like it. It's hot. I like the setting. One thing: Why don't you make the chapters longer? And more details!

Man I like this shit so much! I LOVE VAMPIRES so..

CARRY ON!!!

Author's response

hahaha thanks for kinda helpign me try to improve...
i'll makign em longer lol
xD
thanks


xx