Oh don't be upset!
In fact, I LIKE THIS SHIT!
Seriously! I'm not balling you or anything but when I read Chapter 3 I was like screaming...OMG OMG OMG. THAT'S SO SWEET!
I like it. It's hot. I like the setting. One thing: Why don't you make the chapters longer? And more details!
Man I like this shit so much! I LOVE VAMPIRES so..
CARRY ON!!!
Author's response
hahaha thanks for kinda helpign me try to improve...
i'll makign em longer lol
xD
thanks
xx