Hey that was kinda good...in a strange, disturbing way.
I mean, there's no doubt you're an incredible writer. But the storyline was...odd. But interesting. I kinda feel weird for liking this story, but I like the way you wrote it.
There's one question I'd like to ask though. Why are all the stories you write to do with peodophilia? Well, the two that I've read are. Don't take it the wrong way, i'm just curious to know.
Aside from that, you wrote it very well.
-Emily xox.
Author's response
Hi Emily
I usually write about a topic I'm interested in, and I think the topic of pedophilia is very interesting.
Thanks for the review.
John