(#) kjd 2008-07-26
Should this story contain lemons (or should it be more of a fade to black scene)?
if you can write them then i say you should include them (outtakes if people have problems with it, or just include a notice of where it starts and where it finishes for those whio do not want to read lemons) from what ive read of your work so far you should be able to write them.
When should their relationship go to another level? (IE, How far and when?) how far would you expect people to go in reality, not exactly agreeable if harry is 12 when they go further than a snog or 2, 15 maybe go further than that maybe just before harry turns 15 but id say it might be pushing it then for some people.
What do you consider over powered Harry? able to beat everything with little or no challenge, im fine with a powerfull harry (stronger than dumbles as he is getting on in his years, maybe a few abilities (multiple animagus, elemental are a couple ive read before that if reasoned out properly work well mostly) depends upon how you want harry to apear.
if harry can beat anyone with just 1 spell, or a flick of his wrist then deffonately overpowered IMO
What do you think should happen at Beauxbatons during the school years (1st, 2nd, and 3rd)?
Beauxbatons:- not sure 3rd year could follow cannon slightly by having extra security added if sirius escapes azkaban in your story,
im sure that if you continue how you have been then you should have a good story
(Hogwarts should mainly follow cannon with a few changes thrown in the mix like dumbles saving the stone, noone being found out of bed to deliver a dragon from hagrids hut to charlie and his friends, maybe extracts such as mentions of a troll being let into the school in 1 of hermiones letters to harry keeping him upto date on what is happening there)
keep writing and ill keep reading until its finished =]
kjd