Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) Moonshyne 2008-07-27

I loved it!!

The teasing by the other guys and the heart to heart with Ray was great!!

Looking forward to more.

Author's response

Thanks for reviewing again, i was kind of worried about this chapter so it's good to know you enjoyed it.
I'm guessing that there would be alot of teasing going on and general laughing at each others expense. There will definatley be loads more of that :)